"Wonder Garden"

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Overview
'Wonder Garden' is about a young girl who is transported to a magical world by a teddy bear.

Design Principles
We haven't done actual frame-by-frame drawings in animation, so I wouldn't really be able to critique on that part. However, it looks very well drawn, nicely planned out, and not to mention reminds me of Ghibli.
In-Depth Look
Told from a 3rd person perspective, it tells the story of a girl who sees a teddy bear in a storefront who gives her a beautiful outfit. She and the bear start flying around with other teddy bears to a dark part of the city where a window is, and a huge mechanical teddy bear takes off its head and starts smashing it, freeing everyone. It goes back to the girl, now in her regular clothes, looking at the storefront.
Applications to e-Comm
I love the color palettes they use in this short film, like with the storefront outfit and the magic thing that the bear does in this screenshot. →
Someday I might use some of those color palettes in a graphic design project or something.

Learned Elements
In this same scene (that the screenshot is from), all of the spheres (whatever they are) are moving upward at different speeds, which we learned how to do in Maya a few months ago with our snowflake project. We also learned how to control how far away the surroundings are with a project we did last semester, where we had to create a scenery and make them seem farther and closer away (this happens in the short film).
Well Done!
I don't think there's really anything I dislike about this; the animation looks clean, it's cute, everything is timed nicely, and, again, it reminds me of Ghibli movies (especially when there's a gust of wind).
Improvements
I'd like to see an extended version of this, with an actual story behind the bears and everything that's happening (and why it's happening). Other than that, I don't think any improvements could be made.
Conclusion
All in all, there was almost nothing bad about this film, other than the fact that it left me wanting more.


- Brenna (っ• ◡•)っ


Wonder Garden. Dir. Yojiro Arai. Prod. Yoichi Kawakumi. YouTube. Spiral Cute Inc., 18 Oct. 2013. Web. 10 Mar. 2017.